tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29771877.post2095731077534140742..comments2023-08-23T10:17:46.732-04:00Comments on The Law, Books, and Life: Fiction Friday ChallengeCara Putmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08316731047954376226noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29771877.post-49963396235732357692007-03-31T14:30:00.000-04:002007-03-31T14:30:00.000-04:00I agree, the first one sounds like a thriller.The ...I agree, the first one sounds like a thriller.<BR/><BR/>The second one sounds very interesting, but I don't know...Chanda Canuphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14296956746154503203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29771877.post-1851490279476714962007-03-30T23:39:00.000-04:002007-03-30T23:39:00.000-04:00Hey, thanks, Sabrina. Someday I hope to be in the ...Hey, thanks, Sabrina. Someday I hope to be in the Great Works catgory :-) Line edits on Canteen Dreams are showing me how to keep improving. It's actually fun!Cara Putmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08316731047954376226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29771877.post-40309730577604144012007-03-30T23:35:00.000-04:002007-03-30T23:35:00.000-04:00Oh...I know both, but then I have an unfair advant...Oh...I know both, but then I have an unfair advantage. LOL. <BR/><BR/>Both great great works. ;)<BR/><BR/>I'm struggling with the first paragraph of my Genesis entry right now. It's so important to grab the reader right off. Your two excerpts are great examples of that.Sabrina L. Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13954098747496339033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29771877.post-55941472454513964352007-03-30T23:03:00.000-04:002007-03-30T23:03:00.000-04:00No clue, but definitely sounds like a thriller!No clue, but definitely sounds like a thriller!Gina Conroyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13647753231391009981noreply@blogger.com